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Silence

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Published: Dec 25, 2003

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Literature Text

Silence falls in ringing bells,
only white.

First in my series of haikus, which may or may not actually qualify as haikus. This one in the most likely to though. Many, many, many thanks to

for helping me. Any more critiques... from anyone?

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DarkerSideoftheMoon

pretty haiku. writting those confuses me, but i couldn't write a short poem even if my life depended on it! but reading them is another story. very pretty.