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A blue green hum fills the air.
2nd haiku... I'm not so sure this one turned out. Thoughts anyone? Also... many thanks to :userecho-si: for helping me.
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echo-si Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2004   Writer
I'd go with "hum"
And you're perfectly allowed to comment on your own stuff, but you can also use the edit option (now that it works) & add it into your description.

I LOVE seeing you experiment!!!!
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PrincessNAVI Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2003
Hmmmm.... maybe I should change humming to hum... anyone? Yes, I'm pretty sure it's bad form to comment on your own piece... ::hides::
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